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Old 02-28-05, 04:07 PM   #2
Evident
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Beat is nice. good club beat. Jus a little loud, which kinda effected the quality


1st guy-I'm feelin ya verse flow is nice. Same wit ya delivery and presence. you got the best verse on the song. liked the vick line.

Hook-Its hot pretty catchy. perfect for the beat

2nd guy-Some parts were unclear, more laid back than the first guy. Its straight tho, like the voice, flow is on point.. Good shit though

3rd guy-bringin back the hypeness. not really feelin ya voice, but you got the energy that make you wanna keep listenin, verse is a little short but its all good. flow and everything on point...

Overall-This song is pretty hot somethin that get you movin. The only thing I'd do is lower the beat and vocals a little cuz it takes away from quality. An some of ya addlibs are a little too loud. But this is hot no doubt.

Get at me if you wanna collab, and can you peep out my track wit davine?
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179403
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