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Old 02-28-05, 12:55 PM   #1
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Davine Feat. Evident - Overcome it All
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I'll edit with my links in a minute.

http://www.soundclick.com/davine

First song on top

Any replys I get I'll be sure to check out yours, if you have a song.
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Old 02-28-05, 01:01 PM   #2
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beat is intense...

ur flow is good...work on presence

good rhymes


I like it


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Old 02-28-05, 04:10 PM   #3
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Old 02-28-05, 04:10 PM   #4
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...aight this beat is tight....lines are aight nahmean content is felt ....delivery does need work....emotion a little as well it's like u rhymeing and your like ok lets do this and get it over with..like u sound dry nahmean...hook is felt....


aight 2nd verse lyrically is better then the first verse that wasnt bad but u killin the lyrics on this piece right here...u need to ride the ebat better u fell off a couple of times in spots on this verse....

aight 3rd verse yea flow needs work...delivery could be better doesnt sound to confident on the mic lines are str8 nahmean...over all both emcees came solid as a whole but work on the above and yea props keep it moving
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Old 02-28-05, 05:02 PM   #5
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listenin...
beat is nice
voice is coo
flow and delivery is also pretty nice and on point
lyrics were hott also
overall this is a pretty hott track!
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Old 02-28-05, 05:37 PM   #6
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Aight Check'N It..

Beat Choice Is Nice.

First Voice - Your Flow Is Pretty Sick, Lyrics Were Alright, Tried To Spit Some Metaphors but Eh...Well Your Lyrics Are Average.

Hook - Not Too Catchy, But Aight.

Second Verse - Your Voice Sounded Fake, but Flow Wasn't Too Bad. Lyrics Were Below Average, Nothing Stuck Out.

Third Verse - Your Voice Real Deep, Maybe Your Trying To Hard To Make It That Deep, But Your Flow Isn't Bad, You Sounding A LiL Uncomfortable At One Point.

Overall: This Song Was Pretty Decent, Pretty Hot Collaboration. Stay Up and Do Ya Thang. 8/10

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Old 02-28-05, 05:54 PM   #7
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were is d-town..or what is it..i see ur from PA<I ASK cuz i stay in Pa some of the time..

as for the track..

beets iight...nice flow and it's nice to see thought behind lyrics as unoften as it happpens,decent presence..keep that mentality,keep ya head up
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