...aight this beat is tight....lines are aight nahmean content is felt ....delivery does need work....emotion a little as well it's like u rhymeing and your like ok lets do this and get it over with..like u sound dry nahmean...hook is felt....


aight 2nd verse lyrically is better then the first verse that wasnt bad but u killin the lyrics on this piece right here...u need to ride the ebat better u fell off a couple of times in spots on this verse....

aight 3rd verse yea flow needs work...delivery could be better doesnt sound to confident on the mic lines are str8 nahmean...over all both emcees came solid as a whole but work on the above and yea props keep it moving

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