ha ha, 20 u told me u were doin this one. the samples do sound pretty slick too. i would keep those in but take out the talking part cuz theres realy no need for that. but when the verse starts you keep a consistant flow, i know you can do better than this at some parts as to lyrical content, for example riming body with lobby, i dunno i know u got more skills than that, challenge yourself and you'll mix up those masterpeices u b droppin maaaaaaaaaaan! but yea half way thru i was realy likin ur verse better it fit the beat better n shit. the second dude came nyce with it. def brought the lyrical content, like you got a voice where you kinda can get a perspective on how u are personality wise, like i felt like i had kicked it with u and got to know u after ur verse if that makes n e sence, feel me? your doin you basicallly keep it up playboys.

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