yo I honestly thought this was really lifeless (if I may)...i was not feeling it...
I dont know if this is personal or whatnot but I just wasn't feelin it...u said a line in there about being basic...and I think that's what this is man...u need to up ur vocab and wordplay and all that interesting stuff so the reader can actually get insight from this...anyway I just thought I'd say something cuz no one else said anything...and so u can return the favour...and u better...
here's the link:
heat of the moment- from ya boy feat..doe bagz