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Old 03-02-05, 12:50 PM   #3
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Originally Posted by Thrill_Kill
thanks for the advice, I'll take it to heart,
I"m here to take on the world, this is just to start
trying to show where I'm from with out naming off a trailer park,
hate that damn movie except the battle and beatdown part,
wish I coulda been an extra in the flick that inspired 1000 wannabes
but if I ever meet Em I'm breakin' both his knees,
I know, a shady diss is a bitch way to go,
it's not my fault he makes it so easy though,
gotta get some sleep, but I'm comin back to elaborate,
and once again thx. for the props, maybe someone else will evaluate



yo i'll evaluate that for one...that's really creative man....


I thought ur original peice was good for a rookie...and u definately have rhyming skills...but like the other guy said just add some complicated stuff in there and u'll be on ur way son...

btw return the favour...here:

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