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Old 03-02-05, 01:32 PM   #11
Germ
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^not bad of verse, liked the chorus and shit, first verse, flow was a little bad, but lyrics and vocab were, i think that the poor stucture/flow took away alot of the effect thou, just up that shit....second verse, i liked that one...creative and had better flow which was nice to read, and picked up the pace of the drop a little more, but still, in some places....wordplay coulda been better.....7/10
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