Voted For: ethiks

ok this si simple........

ethicks u had coo structer ok flow.....rhyme scheme was coo too....u punches were dull and boring nothing great but u didnt really nead a lot against D man......

D man your verse was ok....terrible structer...no real punches......well none that were any good n e wayz...u need to elevate alot.....

v/ethicks

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