this remind me of a song... seems like a chorus at teh beginning and in between...

I fell upon this young girl, with so much Trouble
Its like lifes a Bubble, she’s stuck trying to Cuddle

She started to talk a lot more, as an Advance
But all that happened was madness & Trance
She could of tried to talk it out to her Councillor
But she was to vicious, no one could stop Her
Instead she decided to leave, with no such Belief
And yet she never tried to relieve all of her Grief.
^^^tight stuff right here.. i was feeling this the concept was coo, the only fault i find is prolly the fact that u said Once Upon a time so much.. it got just a lil' too repetitive..

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