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GG Haterz
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So the girl didn't talk, and then when a person helped she went insane? Wtf? Overall this wasn't too bad, but I think if you had developed the story line a little more then it would have been 10 times better. Nothing wrong except try to develop your story more.
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Originally Posted by Twisted Visions
50 nickle=less than 50 cent, go back to school you idiot
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