Some decent wordplay here n there, nice flow an structure too, just need work on ya punchlines

But did you get the password for the 1st floor crew forum?
go check it out an check in n stuff, not many threads but by tonight it'll be up n running properly...

An can i get te hook for the collab?
pm it ta me when your done, dont rush tho, i'm still waiting on 2 other verses, but just pm it ta me when your good n ready homie

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