This was pretty good. The concepy was alright and everything else turned out good. The flow was dope because of the structure you used. And teh way you related to other members and what not made this piece even better. I dont think I remember seeing anybody use this kind of thing for a topic of an open mic so this also had nice originality. I also liked teh way you opened this piece...

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It started out strong and helped me to want to read on in the piece. Nice overall job on this, stay up.