Voted For: CriTiC

Supervillian:
your stucture was alright but not as great as expected your imagery was alright coulda been ebtter vocab was pretty damn weak the emotion was ight but coulda been way better the flow was ight coulda been better but really work on creativty and write to amuse others not just to be ya know, pz

Critic:
well you overal had better everythign but i was really feeling your nice vocab great imagery the stucture was super great the emotion was so good and the flow was flawless ahha, if there is ever a topical touney and theres partners or somin i want you to be mine. but keep doin ya thing and get my pm its parallel pz

RTF in my battle with speats links in the sig

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Already vote in battle as Parallel.