ur flow wasnt that good either was ur structre rhymes were horrible up ur vocab alot and don use the same word over like ya did in the first 3 lines weak hook theres no hat though go to the emergency help center and look around there ro u can PM me later and ill give ya advice...please return the feedback in one of my open mics in my signature...peace keep workin at it man ya got potential

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