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Old 03-08-05, 10:37 PM   #42
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Voted For: CriTiC

nice drops on both sides.

critic. i really felt your structure and word play.. you had really good vocab and eveything went smooth. niiiiice job on this one.. .. i liked yours so much because it was honest and it was real.. nice vocab. metas. and rhyme scheme

supervillain.. also a very nice drop .. only thing was ur lines were to stretched which affected the overalll flow.. critic had a really good flow.. your structure was off key.. otherwise a very nice drop .. it just didnt have all the honesty that critics did

nice drop on both parts

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