Banned: Cheating
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IP:
yea a very interesting piece but like in-vision said i have 2 agree there isn't ne imagery & i like the in-depth & elaboration in poems 2 sho off ur poetistic ability but neway vocab was nice...structure was good...& i like how u portrayed a gun as a deadly disease werd make sure 2 return the favor in my poem: Wanna Change My Life??
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