Dope. Emotion in this seemed quite present to me when I was reading this, probably because I have seen lots of mental child abuse, but it was strong. The title, was applicable to the topic, which is great, and you just gave me a massive brainwave for a topic. The metaphors simili's in here were quite good and used in the right context I feel for this topic. The flow was pretty much right on point through the whole piece. Props to you on this.

Great drop.