Voted For: Makeveli Trained

well, this was blah...here what i see

makavelli....first bar was stupid, straight up, didnt rhyme, but you picked it up and had some nice personals in there, your punches were okay, some played.....fruit cake line was my fav, and your closer, those two were your best lines, you need to elevate text, no offense or anything, but it was kinda bad, although, flow wasnt bad, but structure was a little iffy at times....but you could get the hang of text easy...word

kissmyass.....dont fuckin use ~ everywhere, thats fucking gay as hell, i almost wanted to stop reading your verse....structure was okay, flow, off at times....had a few decent hits, but nothing that stood out, need to up your vocab and wordplay to make your verse more interesting, and keep your shit consistent, dont be spreading/stretching your lines too much, and dont have them too short either, and try to diss him on every line....word, elevate dog.....no hate

v/makevelli.....rtf on links in sig....and if you do, explain please...word

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