|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
|
|||||||
| View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
| KizMiAzz |
  
|
1 | 16.67% |
| Makeveli Trained |
  
|
5 | 83.33% |
| Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll | |||
|
|
Thread Tools | Search this Thread | Display Modes |
03-08-05, 07:41 PM
|
#1
|
|
|
Fuck Parents
|
KizMiAzz vs Makeveli Trained
IP: 3240 794D
Battle Rules:
10 lines house rules hope you know what those are g' luck Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-11-05 at 07:41 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
|
|
|
|
03-08-05, 07:42 PM
|
#2
|
|
|
Guest
|
IP: 3240 794D
Makeveli Trained has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 07:42 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
03-08-05, 07:42 PM
|
#3
|
|
|
Guest
|
IP: B1A5 868C
KizMiAzz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-08-05 07:42 PM.
|
|
|
|
|
03-08-05, 07:59 PM
|
#4
|
|
New to RV
|
IP: B1A5 868C
i ~spit~ like its ~Rainin~ on ~makaveli~in~trainin~
slap a bitch for ~complainin~ that his ~brain~iz~strainin~ ur skilz ~containin~ aint comin out of its ~closet~ flowz wouldnt get ~feedback~ if u made a ~deposit~ da~illest heat~ u ever had waz a ~fever~ ~take~a~seat~ u got no mic ur jus a ~daydream~believer~ u~an~emcee~? u cant even lay it down in ~font~4~me~ 10 linez too? we belive in ~quality~not~quantaty~ i ~tear~ya~bars~ like a ~hogan~vest~ drown dat azz in ~holy~water~ ta leave u ~blessed~
__________________
R.hymin'.At.W.ill
|
|
|
|
03-09-05, 05:14 PM
|
#5
|
|
|
Fuck Parents
|
IP: 28AD 5545
aight, im writing right now, i should have it in like 30 minutes
__________________
CS
....for life |
|
|
|
|
|
03-09-05, 05:30 PM
|
#6
|
|
|
Fuck Parents
|
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
This gay fag, prolly would like me to kiss his ass
He rhymes bad, altho shyt.... .................it's hard to read text thru trash bags Feeding off ya rhymes, i'd need a tube of Tooth Paste Guess u heard i Eat emcees, but im allergic ta Fruit Cakes Seems as if im battlin Vanailla Ice's wack duplicate Kid got mad jus cuz he didnt get into crhyme sindicate Not even close kid, im ahead of you by far He's like a Spring Cell Phone, cuz he barely has a Bar I shoulda been nicer, merkin this kid was kinda wrong to do But shyt if i wrote my lines like this.............................................. .................................................. i'd stil have a better structure than you
__________________
CS
....for life |
|
|
|
|
|
03-09-05, 05:35 PM
|
#7
|
|
|
Fuck Parents
|
IP: 28AD 5545
shyt, that 8th line is supposed to say sprint cell phone
newayz, vote it up kids
__________________
CS
....for life |
|
|
|
|
|
03-09-05, 05:49 PM
|
#8
|
|
|
www.militantmusic.com
|
IP: 6804 D41F
Voted For: KizMiAzz
ight this was a weak battle all around nothin really stood out but kizmiazz gets my vote cause............ his punches hit they werent hard but they hit non the less structre was a lil good come lines were a lil stretched but they worked flow was a lil choppy but it was ight...metas were ight...not alot of wordplay...but u had some tight multis which were the reason u got my vote.................. best line-da~illest heat~ u ever had waz a ~fever~ ~take~a~seat~ u got no mic ur jus a ~daydream~believer~ please returnt the favor in my battle in my sig peace
__________________
Clcik Hear To Hear My Music |
|
|
|
|
03-09-05, 05:56 PM
|
#9
|
|
|
Fuck Parents
|
IP: 28AD 5545
maybe i shoulda gave explanations cuz this is very sad, im guessin you just dont get any of the personals or nething then, w/e
__________________
CS
....for life |
|
|
|
|
|
03-10-05, 11:35 AM
|
#10
|
|
E-Style, Bitch.
|
This was feedback posted for KizMiAzz
IP: B1A5 868C
lol.....................
my alias y'all  check the polls on this
__________________
People Hate What They Can't Conquer |
|
|
|
|
03-10-05, 05:32 PM
|
#11
|
|
New to RV
|
IP: 2313 AF8B
Voted For: Makeveli Trained
vote = makeveli mak had slightly better punchz, although they were still not great... kiz..if those ~ are supposed to denote multis you need to work on em..cos ~fever~ doesn't multi with ~daydream~believer~. they rhyme but they don't multi...also your punchz got diluted cos you seemed to be throwin in random words for tha sake of rhymin at tha expense of meaning...something which i almost do mahself but hey..
__________________
 Open Battles - none
|
|
|
|
03-10-05, 07:40 PM
|
#12
|
|
|
Fuck Parents
|
IP: 28AD 5545
damn, if i knew your alias before it woulda been personal city, lol
uppin
__________________
CS
....for life |
|
|
|
|
|
03-11-05, 08:48 AM
|
#13
|
|
E-Style, Bitch.
|
IP: ECB3 36A0
lol, im not even serious with this alias
took me 6 minutes ta write an post the verse, if i win, you are whacked out.....
__________________
People Hate What They Can't Conquer |
|
|
|
|
03-11-05, 05:16 PM
|
#14
|
|
|
Fuck Parents
|
IP: 28AD 5545
o so you think your funny, huh
na, but actually i was assuming you were a noob so i thought a wak verse would be enuff, maybe not tho, lol
__________________
CS
....for life |
|
|
|
|
|
03-11-05, 05:31 PM
|
#15
|
|
|
in your system
|
IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: Makeveli Trained
well, this was blah...here what i see makavelli....first bar was stupid, straight up, didnt rhyme, but you picked it up and had some nice personals in there, your punches were okay, some played.....fruit cake line was my fav, and your closer, those two were your best lines, you need to elevate text, no offense or anything, but it was kinda bad, although, flow wasnt bad, but structure was a little iffy at times....but you could get the hang of text easy...word kissmyass.....dont fuckin use ~ everywhere, thats fucking gay as hell, i almost wanted to stop reading your verse....structure was okay, flow, off at times....had a few decent hits, but nothing that stood out, need to up your vocab and wordplay to make your verse more interesting, and keep your shit consistent, dont be spreading/stretching your lines too much, and dont have them too short either, and try to diss him on every line....word, elevate dog.....no hate v/makevelli.....rtf on links in sig....and if you do, explain please...word
__________________
this world is a drug, and everyone's selfish FLY FREE |
|
|
|
|
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
