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Old 03-12-05, 03:07 PM   #15
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Voted For: rooq

rooq - took this battle easily...you had a somewhat deecent structure here with way harder punches and personals. You had a good flow in your verse and you had some good vocab use. you had some kick ass multis in there that made you win this battle easily one sided. Good verse man....8/10

AssAsInS-eVolve! - wasn't really feelin this verse too much man. you structure is wacked out. fix that right now and you will come a lot harder. also your lines seemed to have forced rhymes in my opinion and it made your verse look worse. Elevate your structure and flow and punches and you'll be better..

v/rooq

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