omfg.. this actually like put tears to my eyes.. this was a dope piece.. the first verse was lacking i mean dont get me wrong its better then anything else u'll read on here.. but for u i coulda seen better.. but after that it just picked up soo fast.. and it was coming heavy the whole way thru.. the rhyme scheme was very nice.. the emotion was what sent this over the edge.. this is definitely top 3 pieces i've ever read on here.. and one of the other ones is written by you too.. this was a great piece.. definitely hall of fame material.. pz fam..

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