Voted For: schema

same five guys in every battle...damn thats subtle dude...
real vets dont need a clone machine to get a double-you...

dreams of sonnin me...ho come back to reality...
watch this fatal lyrik catch a lyrical fatality...

^^^^^ those two won u the battle..... and that opener was real creative but didnt hit that hard..... u had really funny punches.... flow was ehh and vocab wasnt great... but this is a battle... i dont needa read imagery and shit wen ur dissin the guy

Fatal had a weak opener....... prety stupid.... u put the punch as the first line, as u did with alotta lines, like the "shoes off" one... to make a punch more effective, u needa put it at the end of the bar... only thing u had goin for u was a better flow and just slightly better vocab.. but that cant win battles..... ur punches were misplaced and badly worded, along with alotta filler in some parts....

neither verse was the greatest, but schema pulled out a couple hard-hittin fgunny punches to win it no doubt....... good battls

V/schema

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