Love how the story progressed and how you managed to portray the situation in such a vivid, emotional yet powerful way.

Kept vocab quite simple which I liked because too high vocab can sometimes really affect the content of the piece but that wasn't the case here because you find a good balance.
Was also definately feeling your flow and I absolutely LOVED the twist in the ending.

I thought the guy had accepted the fact she was pregnant and then he does kill himself, that was a nice ending in my opinion. You kept switching back and forth between emotions and I'm sure as hell liking that.

Great read and made me think about some stuff actually (<- if you can do that, you know this was damn good)

DQ

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