Voted For: CriTiC

blah both came really weak.. i mean supervillains lines were about 2.3 miles long.. his structure was way off flow was lacking.. and i wasnt really feeling the story line on either, both lacked imagery.. but CriTic did have some nice emotion thru out his.. but Crit dont over vocab ur verses shit sounds mad played, and it really doesnt fit well for a topical.. but due to the emotion factor i gotta give this oen to CriTic.. no hate just voting honest...

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