I'm no vet!..just skilled
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This was feedback posted for Spektikul
IP:
ok...........
c.a.l.i - you had an ok verse....wordplay was coo punches were coo......multies were there too....it wasnt really a good verse...it just seemed ordinary....and your structer sucks....and that rapper/wrapper shit was just dumb.....and so was the slim shady line...but u said shady slim lmao....seamed like u was trying to hard and u steppeed on your own foot........no hate tho....
Spek - your verse was good....nice punches...personals....i like the exercise line....not really any multies...but coo wordplay....ummm....your rhyme scheme was better than cali's......and your structer was way better i didnt have to look hard to read and understand....and none were forced lines they just flowed....good job...
vote/spek
well thats if i could vote...but i just found out i cant...so i'll leave this as feed
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