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Old 03-20-05, 12:34 AM   #30
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Voted For: Spektikul

CALI:

Thats not minutes to drop thats steps im beyind um!!
Stay on my dick he a good rapper/wrapper......
too bad hes encasing a condom!!
^^rapper/wrapper lines are wack but decent attempt 4/10
Was never no hate i always thought youd shine in time
But you aint never elevate even ya avys pen is behind in times
^^good personal 8/10
One of a kind?.......nope!!trash textcees a dime a dozen
Ya lyrics is dope.........
with more cuts then holloween pumpkins!!{1}
^^hot metaphors in this bar 8/10
Pardon me munchkin this a tall order you small package
Big things in small sizes.......
ya verse holds a immeasurable amount of wackness
^^decent 6/10
If our words backflipped then youd defintaly win
So trading votes is 'Shady'..........
but without um ya chances is just 'Slim'
^^good punch and meta 7/10
Fuck him hes not even decent spek you far from a vet bastard
You just another 'Rook' i removed from the 'Board'......
call me the chessmaster!!
^^decent closer nice meta 7/10

overall: 40/70 (57%)

Spektikul:

This time around your rhyme is bound to hit me where ya wanna
Only way youll ever spit 'dope' shit, is in a topical on marijuana
^^played concept 4/10
This is a one sided rally provided Cali's dickriders dont contribute
Thinks he's phat, check all the links this kat needs to distibute
^^decent punch, but not a personal cuz that could be used on anoyone who uses links 5/10
Ive read his battles before, either shorter or to each border
He could only consider himself above me ... in alphebetical order
^^good punch 7/10
This fag brags about how many legs hes opened, something I cant stand
Are you sure her name wasnt Palm-a-la, someone also known as your hand
^^wack 3/10
How you supposed to offend me, you worked at Wendys and that shits sad
Im battling a twenty-four year old wanksta thats old enough to be my dad
^^decent 5/10
Your audio is gaudy yo, You aint rapping in ya mic...you just abuse it
Have you ever heard of talent? You should look for it so you can use it
^^dope 9/10
Once I win you can bet this vets rep will be swept into the trash can
Cali's such a fuckin 'pussy', before we battled he got a 'cat-scan'
^^dope punch dope meta 9/10
This battle aint a total waste, Ill get excersice once I pound through
But I could get more excerice, if I were to actually run around you
^^lmfao dope shit again 8/10
Rap Verse is ya life, so I will try not to lyrically heat-you-up
An keep talkin shit on computer, on the street I could beat-you-up.
^^wack lol 3/10

overall: 53/90 (59%)

Vote: Spektikul

C.A.L.I you shoulda used 1 more decent line and you would have won, probably the wackest i have seen you come...

Return the favor with an honest vote on this battle... no one votes anymore so it will be appreciated, dont rtf i wont vote on anymore of youre battles and i vote more than anyone

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