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Old 03-21-05, 02:19 PM   #2
fluidmoon
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I'm at a loss for words right now, but all i can say is continue to be strong,i am sorry about what happened to you and your momma, this poem is emotional, it is good for what type of poem it is, but you should work on your spelling and punctuation, but keep it up.1
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