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Old 03-22-05, 10:56 PM   #5
Germ
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wordizzle....that was dope....always liked the shit you write, the end was dope, like last half...first bar was sweet too, good vocab, wordplay was good....structure, decent, flow was kinda off on those two longer lines i felt, but overall it was consistent, fun to read, good pace to it....one word.....whaack..nah, j/m, dope as hell.....minty read....keep up
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