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03-21-05, 11:30 PM
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Guess Who's Back?
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Chorus... Guess Who's Back? Holy shit now the game is stacked... Guess Who's Back? Ain't no chance now that anx is back... Guess Who's Back? Now your gonna have to face the facts... Guess Who's Back? Here to teach you all the way to rap... Verse... Now that I'm back, It's time to get to buisness... I'm vicious, and I aint doin shit but mischeif... Only reason I'm back, is to get on your nerves... Freepost here and there, and shit on you herbs... Like Flow, if I tried I'd be four times as dope... But instead, all I do is snort lines of coke... Blaze enough dank, till my brain is swimmin... Raise enough bank, till my chain is spinnin... Fuck neglect, respect, is what I'm riskin my neck for... & fuck a sauna, marijuana, is what I'm kissin my check for... I been told I'm whack, by whites and blacks... Nothing for me to do, but start fightin back... And prove myself, but then i start to lose myself... Drugs got me to the point where i confuse myself... Till i can't even tell, which words rhyme or not... Or what lines to throw away, and what lines to drop... These drugs i got, and pills i pop, it's time to stop... But i know i will not, unless I'm tossed in detox... To tell the truth, I think I was conceived tight... Cause I'm better than most........... .....................................And i can't even think right... Vision, can't see my mission, I'm full of ambition... I don't understand what I'm riskin, with every decision.. But i hit with percision, with a powerful collision... And i guess I'm the reason, for RV's attrition... Chorus... Guess Who's Back? Holy shit now the game is stacked... Guess Who's Back? Ain't no chance now that anx is back... Guess Who's Back? Now your gonna have to face the facts... Guess Who's Back? Here to teach you all the way to rap... Last edited by anxiety : 03-22-05 at 11:23 PM. |
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03-21-05, 11:34 PM
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03-22-05, 07:49 PM
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03-22-05, 10:41 PM
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03-22-05, 10:56 PM
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wordizzle....that was dope....always liked the shit you write, the end was dope, like last half...first bar was sweet too, good vocab, wordplay was good....structure, decent, flow was kinda off on those two longer lines i felt, but overall it was consistent, fun to read, good pace to it....one word.....whaack..nah, j/m, dope as hell.....minty read....keep up
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03-22-05, 10:57 PM
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ps.....all people really do now is check out OM or keep dropping new one....so be prepared for this to get slept on madly, but yours is pretty dope, so who knows haha
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03-22-05, 11:05 PM
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Yeah,This Account = Alias
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idk but im speechlessand how dope a come back this was.................. ................ ........
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03-22-05, 11:23 PM
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Thanks guys... And of course it will be slept on... All OM's are.
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03-22-05, 11:23 PM
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~Real Rookie Of The Year~
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Wow this shit was great vocab structure wordplay loved this entire drop we should collab sometime. this shit gets a certified 9/10
btw repay the favor links in sig! |
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03-22-05, 11:52 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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See thats why we used to collab so much... you get 2 dope heads together and shit like this happens... dope piece, i see you been working on them multies a bit, pulled them out the bag. Flow was decent a lil choppy but other than that it was solid.
Fuck neglect, respect, is what I'm riskin my neck for... & fuck a sauna, marijuana, is what I'm kissin my check for... ^^now that was just sick that bar alone was a 10/10 using my old style.. thats why its dope But all together this piece was hot and we'll do a collab as soon as my lazy ass decids to get on AIM overall: 9.5/10
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03-22-05, 11:54 PM
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I can't get on AIM till like Saturday... But we definetly need to collab...
And yeah, when i thought of that line i was like, DAMN... |
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03-23-05, 12:40 AM
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^^ This piece was dope.. glad to see ya back man..
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03-23-05, 01:45 AM
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Better than you..
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IP:
nice drop. this was actually impressive.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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03-23-05, 02:42 AM
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Hey what you guys think of the chorus? I've always had hard times with those, but this one seems pretty good to me, what yall think?
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03-23-05, 06:18 PM
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