Honest opinnon?
aight here goes my niga...

His little nephew loves 50 Cent, he went for the same
Not knowing his uncle hasn't got 50 cents to his name
^^^
thats the best bar in the peice....

the rest was, i dunno, i wouldnt say boring, cause i read it all, an i didnt get half way thru an think...whaaack, but its i dunno, its pretty hard ta explain, i think the way u word your verses could of been better, so when u read it, it actually flows better...do ya feel me?

but it was nice, the concept of the peice was somthin diffrent, the emotion an the message u sent across was hard hittin an emotional, overral it was enjoyable, its just the way u worded some of the lines, it didnt flow too well in my head, ya know? when i was reading it, it was almost like reading a book in some parts, but i enjoyed it too the fullest, maybe u dont understand what am trynna say with the whole ''didnt flow well in some parts'' comment, an by no means it is not a hate commenst, cause it was deep, fyull of emotion, an the idea an concept couldnt of been any more on point

i rate this peice a 8.5/10...would of been a 9, but for the things i stated above, it took the sting out of some of the points u tried ta make

dope stuff tho, keep em comin dogg

Peace out

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