Concept might not be too special but I enjoy reading this type of drops because you notice the truth in it. It doesn't take a genius to figure out this was written from the heart.

The strongest aspect was the emotion of course, I feel you portrayed an image of sorrow, confusion, insecurity but the most clear one was the love. Your word choice was excellent, you managed to really picture it inside my head and make me feel what you experienced. The flow wasn't always that good but it didn't affect the content of your piece in any way. I enjoyed reading the hook and also the different levels in your piece itself were nice to read. You made me stand still here and there, think about love and my own life in a way. It's also easy to relate to because everyone has been in a similar situation before I think.

Solid drop!

DQ

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