Troop:

Like Ambient stated, ur verse was a bunch of similies and metas, with semi-punches at the end, but they dont land very hard at all....... the line i felt the most was:

U talkin hood..U Not 50..if any ..Really..Ya Bodys not full of any Holes
u like an Injured David Beckham.Basically ya Lifes not full of any Goals

..... decent verse, with the multiple end rhymes, but u arent really attacking ambient.... its just a basic diss, and they dont hit very hard besides that.

Ambient:

.. yea u were kinda rusty, structure was alil off in the opener, but u filled ur verse with metas, punches, and personals, unlike troop, who really only focused on metas.... ur best bar to me was:

let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve
realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge

by far, because most of the rest of ur verse was more simplistic, besides that and another bar... luckily for u, complexity is not the only indicator in a battle.... and for the nice personals and punches, U WIN

V/Ambient

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