Voted For: Adrenaline

adrenaline took dis shit wit ease
heres my feedback

adrenaline
I bet this kid's bustin his time just to think of one punchline
while I'll be struttin wit these rhymes and breakin his spine--
you aint a friend a mine,as a matter of fact how could you?
ur name's bradley_thomas,ur parent's musta been coocoo--
Just lookin at ur previous battles I have to say u really suck newbie
97 posts...joined september...and u still gettin fucked like groupies--
dont even know If I already killed you,but by ur record I probably have
c'mon dawg........even these lines have more life than ur avatar has--
look man the battle heading says bradley_thomas vs. adrenaline
if u cant conquer ur fear of me...then it's obvious u aint gonna win--
u admitted yourself u aren't good at battling,yet alone hardly
u'll die now,just like you died since the first time u came to RV--
I wasn't gonna post before cuz I wanted to have a chance to study you
but I was wrong.....ur life spans worse than ur rhymes..."used up too soon"--
there's no need to talk about you anymore,I think i'll just stop now
I dont know why...maybe it's because ur RV life is still at "HOW?"...

good punches
like da personals
easy structure 2 undastand
elevate sum more and u wudve really murked dis kid
8/10

bradley thomas
im gonna drop u like bombs- theyll pick u up with tongs
one question. r u guy- did u have a sex change, dont lie- u use to be a girl but now ur a guy- did u change so you could fuck ur mom whose sellin for two fifty five- i feel srry for u(sigh)- u date little boys- they end up playin u like little toys- when they dump u make a little too much noise- u dated the clerk at the grocry store- your nuttin but a fuckin whole- someday ur body will turn up on the shore- tell ur mom i had a good time last night- at first, she wasnt much of a sight- but i turned out the light- thats how u got supper last night- but u wont get any tonight because we got in a fight- the thing is, Adrenaline im ur dad- ur mom sat in my lap- soon she was preagnant and got really sad- she almost killed u because ur a fucker and dont deserve to have life or death- ur as good as ur moms breath

oooookkkkkkk lemme break u down
work on ur structure for 1, dat shit wuz awful
i cudnt undastand 1 line
calm down wit dat mom shit real gay
elevate till ur in heaven cuz ur shit wuz wack
no hate bradley but u really need 2 work on ur rhymez
3/10

my v/adrenaline 4 everything, betta punches,structure and all dat shit

ay yall check out my battle vs the kid
please leave good adequate feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
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