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bradley_thomas has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-22-05 04:08 PM.

im gonna drop u like bombs- theyll pick u up with tongs
one question. r u guy- did u have a sex change, dont lie- u use to be a girl but now ur a guy- did u change so you could fuck ur mom whose sellin for two fifty five- i feel srry for u(sigh)- u date little boys- they end up playin u like little toys- when they dump u make a little too much noise- u dated the clerk at the grocry store- your nuttin but a fuckin whole- someday ur body will turn up on the shore- tell ur mom i had a good time last night- at first, she wasnt much of a sight- but i turned out the light- thats how u got supper last night- but u wont get any tonight because we got in a fight- the thing is, Adrenaline im ur dad- ur mom sat in my lap- soon she was preagnant and got really sad- she almost killed u because ur a fucker and dont deserve to have life or death- ur as good as ur moms breath

Adrenaline has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-23-05 01:37 PM.

I bet this kid's bustin his time just to think of one punchline
while I'll be struttin wit these rhymes and breakin his spine--
you aint a friend a mine,as a matter of fact how could you?
ur name's bradley_thomas,ur parent's musta been coocoo--
Just lookin at ur previous battles I have to say u really suck newbie
97 posts...joined september...and u still gettin fucked like groupies--
dont even know If I already killed you,but by ur record I probably have
c'mon dawg........even these lines have more life than ur avatar has--
look man the battle heading says bradley_thomas vs. adrenaline
if u cant conquer ur fear of me...then it's obvious u aint gonna win--
u admitted yourself u aren't good at battling,yet alone hardly
u'll die now,just like you died since the first time u came to RV--
I wasn't gonna post before cuz I wanted to have a chance to study you
but I was wrong.....ur life spans worse than ur rhymes..."used up too soon"--
there's no need to talk about you anymore,I think i'll just stop now
I dont know why...maybe it's because ur RV life is still at "HOW?"...

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I obviously won this easy...it's plainly one sided Im only saying that honestly...
first of all...bradley what were you trying to do...make up some "story" about me?...that was not a battle...and ur lines didn't even rhyme or made no sense...im not mad or anything...I just didn't know one of my bars was TRUE...lol...elevate...

on my part..it was also weak...but hec to me I still won...

DATS DA TOOTH...

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Voted For: Adrenaline

dis was a ok battle

Bradley-ya weak and wack no offence...structure was terrible all ova da place...maybe next time you'll throw in some decent punches...flow was aight...

Adrenaline-yous aight in dis battle...structure was betta...flow was ok nuttin mind blowin..punches hit weak but dey landed....vocab in bad use also..

v/adrenaline....

this battle should have been closed when the dinosaurs died.............................................. ...fuckin vote dammit...

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Voted For: Adrenaline

adrenaline took dis shit wit ease
heres my feedback

adrenaline
I bet this kid's bustin his time just to think of one punchline
while I'll be struttin wit these rhymes and breakin his spine--
you aint a friend a mine,as a matter of fact how could you?
ur name's bradley_thomas,ur parent's musta been coocoo--
Just lookin at ur previous battles I have to say u really suck newbie
97 posts...joined september...and u still gettin fucked like groupies--
dont even know If I already killed you,but by ur record I probably have
c'mon dawg........even these lines have more life than ur avatar has--
look man the battle heading says bradley_thomas vs. adrenaline
if u cant conquer ur fear of me...then it's obvious u aint gonna win--
u admitted yourself u aren't good at battling,yet alone hardly
u'll die now,just like you died since the first time u came to RV--
I wasn't gonna post before cuz I wanted to have a chance to study you
but I was wrong.....ur life spans worse than ur rhymes..."used up too soon"--
there's no need to talk about you anymore,I think i'll just stop now
I dont know why...maybe it's because ur RV life is still at "HOW?"...

good punches
like da personals
easy structure 2 undastand
elevate sum more and u wudve really murked dis kid
8/10

bradley thomas
im gonna drop u like bombs- theyll pick u up with tongs
one question. r u guy- did u have a sex change, dont lie- u use to be a girl but now ur a guy- did u change so you could fuck ur mom whose sellin for two fifty five- i feel srry for u(sigh)- u date little boys- they end up playin u like little toys- when they dump u make a little too much noise- u dated the clerk at the grocry store- your nuttin but a fuckin whole- someday ur body will turn up on the shore- tell ur mom i had a good time last night- at first, she wasnt much of a sight- but i turned out the light- thats how u got supper last night- but u wont get any tonight because we got in a fight- the thing is, Adrenaline im ur dad- ur mom sat in my lap- soon she was preagnant and got really sad- she almost killed u because ur a fucker and dont deserve to have life or death- ur as good as ur moms breath

oooookkkkkkk lemme break u down
work on ur structure for 1, dat shit wuz awful
i cudnt undastand 1 line
calm down wit dat mom shit real gay
elevate till ur in heaven cuz ur shit wuz wack
no hate bradley but u really need 2 work on ur rhymez
3/10

my v/adrenaline 4 everything, betta punches,structure and all dat shit

ay yall check out my battle vs the kid
please leave good adequate feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
holla back cheaaaa!

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Voted For: Adrenaline

Adrenaline...nice drop yo...flow was on point as was ure structure...few lines cud be shortened to make ure structure top...wordplay was nice...gud vocabs not just rhymin wit simple words...punches were hittin hard...not all but most were and u stayed mostly consistent...not much for creativity...couple of hot personals that i enjoyed...gud drop overall...just work on beefin up ure punches and get a bit more creative yo...7/10

bradley...this shit was weak...no hate or anything but the structure was fucked...u got it all squashed together and it makes it near on impossible to read and see the rhymes...obviously ure flow was fucked to...ure rhymin was pretty basic, nuthin overly complex...personals and punches were weak, prolly one in there i thought was gud...creativity was low, nuthin in there that i aint seen before...u need to elevate in all areas yo, but most importantly work on that structure cuz it is wack...no hate just criticism...4/10



return the fave yo....my links are in my siggy!!!

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Voted For: Adrenaline

EASY IN MY OPINION, BRADLEY YOU NEED TO UP YOUR VOCAB......A LOT....AND WORK ON YOUR STRUCTURE, YOUR PERSONALS WERENT SPECIFIC AND KINDA PLAYED. ADRENALINE GETS THIS FOR DECENT PUNCHES AND ACTUALLY USING PERSONALS, NO HATE
RETURN THE FAVOU, LNKS IN SIG

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