yeah man I totally preciated the fbak...I like contructive critisism, but I dont like deconstructive critisism > "this poem.....hmmmm
look i know the ins n outs of poetry ad this is wack (poet of da month right here lmao)be proud(poet of da month right here lmao)be proud(poet of da month right here lmao)be proud(poet of da month right here lmao)be proud(poet of da month right here lmao)be proud(poet of da month right here lmao)be proud(poet of da month right here lmao)be proud(poet of da month right here lmao)and be proud" that.....just seemed kinda superfluous, and self-infatuated thats all man. you coulda left that out, sall good that you didnt think the poem was good, i have a different style than you, just cause it aint the same doesnt mean you should gloat cause you thinks your better. maybe next time just try not to come across as such a penis thats all