P-Q-R-S-Dizzle

boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away
haha.... i liked this opener, had me crackin up
a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit
his verses..
got more funny symbols than the spanish language
approximate rhyme is not that good, coulda been worded better with "funny symbols"
quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers
quote here, lol..... alil played, but aight
*does marv jay stretched style.. except with a good punch*

kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished
if i gave him a brick..
.......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it
really liked this line! even tho i sed somethin like this before, but that was in a topical track

Marv:

dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick.....
when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT
.... ehh ok opener, lil stretched and not hard-hittin
cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack...
yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq"....
.....ok..... first line was an ok similie, but the punch wasnt very hard hittin again, yo momma shit has been played since before i was born...
fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit..
its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT"..
this was ur only decent line to me, nice multies in it with a decen punch
u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap...
cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date"....
wtf??? that was bad, no rhymin at all, woulda been decent if it was anywhere close to rhymin.... shoulda kept it at "no release".. bad closer lost u the battle

Decent battle...... but S-dizzle got this, opener and closer were both real nice for him, while ur weakest lines were ur opener and closer..... sdizzle squeaks by in my book.....

v/sdizzle

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