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This was a decent read, feel it could have been alot better
Stucture was off , and all verses...
I feel people should'nt end there lines w/ // beacuse it makes it seem like a pause then a continous verse..
overall its was decent , both did okay, elevate hope to see another OM'
from you both
Ps: Drop a link to an OM' you have left feed back on or this will be closed
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