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Old 03-26-05, 11:09 PM   #1
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Red face Alter Egos (Crazy freestyle extended) Feat. EXCELL

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Hood_Dawg:
fuck i'm oh so more crazier than ken kaniff
whenever i shit my pants i take a big whiff
i feel like michael jacksons kidz sore n' stiff
when i smoke this weed ima drive off a cliff
i got AIDS & genital herpes started coughin
now i got buried alive jackin off in my coffin
went retarded on BMX like im Matt Hoffmann
& now i went pop like i was Christina Aguilera
when she secretly cheated & fucked davemirra
im 1/2 polish and 1/2 german and im still dope
i'ma rap till i'm old, untill u think i'm the pope
i just went 2 jail and already dropped the soap
im the pimp & u the gimp that walks wit a limp
i'll serve u as if u was Mcdonalds grilled shrimp
u could easily see why i got expelled u can tell
enough with my ass after the hook jam with exell

i'm proud ta admit i'm a retarded faggot
dont know bout u but im doin this naked
we know we not women we try ta fake it
im proud of my virginity dont try 2 take it

X-Cell:
I need medaction please help me cause my brains crazy
Im slim..im alwasy on drugs like kim so i must stay shady/
I love weed i like speed and cocaine is ever so beatuiful
But this acids closein in all the walls AM I IN A CUBICLE!/
I must be on some hell of a trip im havein one night in paris
In the hilton put more pills in my system but nicky well take care of us/
Wrap me in a blanket god i cant take it all these drugs is gettin out of hand
But dont u take them pills outa my hand i dont think yall understand/
Dont fuck with a man and his contriband that aint cool
I get hilary duff so wet its like i threw her in a pool/
I love white chicks that now how to use there tounge
I had ciara goin O way before it was ever soung/
I had mariha hitten them high notes
Hold on i gota wipe the coke from my nose/
Snif Snif Wipe Wipe Write Write u feel me right
I dont think ive ever been this high in my life/
Im way dirtier then the dozen this is the gun im clutchin
Right now i dont care if my lines is really punchein/

i'm proud ta admit im a retarded faggot
dont know bout u but im doin this naked
we know we not women we try ta fake it
im proud of my virginity dont try 2 take it

Hood_dawg:
me and Excell are just a bunch of masterbators
that has more splooge marks than Room Raiders
and now wee getting more kinky than gladiators
fuckin a big ass booty ho in the back of a studio
got a lil moody though, hit & slapped all in a row
she grabbed my dickk she just would not let go
meanwhile i'm workin on vocals and instrumentals
i grabbed a jellyfish and whipped out my testicals
and i purposly zapped my nuts with it's tentacules
raped a old tranvestite in the back of some rentals
sucking on my mom's breast now it turned 2 incest
i'm not like the rest i'm startin ta get really messed
who woulda guessed i would watch my ma undress
i stuck my tung up my cats ass the past is the past
stuck this fatbitch with a gun pulled the trigga 2 blast
blew off a huge mass and she poured out all Slim Fast
waitin ta kill myself after this verse, the hook atlast!!

i'm proud ta admit im a retarded faggot
dont know bout u but im doin this naked
we know we not women we try ta fake it
im proud of my virginity dont try 2 take it

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Old 03-27-05, 12:23 AM   #2
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yo uppin this shit
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Old 03-27-05, 12:55 AM   #3
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Disturbing But Interesting..
The Imagery Of This Piece Is Horrid..
You Fellas Have Too Much Free Time...
...Very Well...
Wordplay Was Wicked...
Rhyme Scheme Nice..
Few Metaphors..
Alot Of Multies..
Good Drop Excluding The Descriptions..
Blah...
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Old 03-27-05, 01:09 AM   #4
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thanks for the feedback...........................
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Old 03-27-05, 09:02 AM   #5
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uppin on this shit...
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Old 03-27-05, 11:54 AM   #6
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uppin yo........
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Old 03-28-05, 05:09 PM   #7
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stop sleepin and leave feed yo......
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Old 03-28-05, 05:10 PM   #8
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Old 03-28-05, 08:21 PM   #9
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yeah...i didnt want to admit it...but hood, u are officially crazy as fuck...and dats not a bad thang cuz ur craziness is entertainin to me...lmao thru tha whole thang

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Old 03-28-05, 08:38 PM   #10
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ahahahah good shit fukked up but good good drop fam chea
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Old 03-29-05, 04:44 PM   #11
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yo still uppin this shit.....
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Old 03-30-05, 07:55 PM   #12
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uppin on this crazy ass shit
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Old 03-30-05, 09:24 PM   #13
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blah, this was good.............................................. ................
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Old 03-30-05, 09:25 PM   #14
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WHOA!!! ROFL!!! hate to admit it man, but for real, this shit was DOPE! lol, ya, shit was fire in my eyes, first verse killed the rest, owned the whole shit, wierd, damn crazy yo, but still found it fire, yup second line was good, but the third almost got a little to bad... it wasnt good, you got to disgusting and nasty and shit yo, but the 1.st 2 verses were fucking hot and the chorus was hot, make a track f'real lol that was crazy stuff.

1st verse. 9/10

2nd Verse. 7.5/10

3rd verse. 4/10

overall: 20.5/30

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Old 03-30-05, 10:06 PM   #15
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Damn man nice drop.. gotta put this on audio, and when yah do.. Hook me up wit the link!!!
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