Because I know deep inside...I could never take her again...
I shoulda realized this weeks ago...It shoulda came to an end...
The rain hits my shoulders...another car splashes me with water...
I thought I won the battle.........until the war got so much harder...

nice way to end it, thought these lines were the ones that flowed the best/really brought out what you were saying......you had an okay verse, you know, coulda had a better, steady flow, some places i thought you used too much commas and it slowed down the pace a little, but whatever, it was good overall....some lines i thought coulda been worded better, but i thought for the most part you had a really good handle on your vocab, kept it nice and even throught your piece, which is good.......good imagery, really brought up a picture....emotion was decent, and again, i thought those last two bars really topped this piece of nicely, even the 3rd last bar.....keep up man

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