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Old 04-01-05, 01:49 PM   #16
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Voted For: Elementality

to be honest i thought this was quite close.first off elementality had better structure, the kid ya bars were uneven, work on that, also the kid..that "make it fresher" line..
i dnt know if its intentional but thats a line from an eminem track.vocab goes to elementality,punnches pretty even, you both cud hve bin more creative.overall fairly tight but element tried to get sum personals in, not much in it but a slightly better drop from elementality gives him this on.


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