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Old 04-01-05, 04:46 PM   #2
convicted
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NICE DROPcould use a little work..........
flow waz aigh but your structure put ya sentences
in tha wrong spot i read it 3 times man just ta see
story line is wat kept me readin it..........some apreciate
feed back well i gave ya some son.......keep elevatin.........CB83holla
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