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Limited Edition's - Losing the battle

OSB and Jdot - Loneliest Number

My niga T-Mark got older and married his high school sweet heart'
She was mad beautiful, noone knocked her knowledge cuz she's smart'
He encouraged her right they never gotten discourage to fight'
He kept her in his sight helping the broad become a nurse in her life'
I wont deny in the past sometimes I put my eyes on her ass'
But she was my nigas hook and I refused trying to smash'
T was whipped on her meat,so bad he wouldnt talk to chick that we meet'
Even the temptation had him scared to let them sit on his meat'
Everytime I tried to convince him that it wasnt cheatin or creepin'
He made an excuse saying how these freak would just leave him'
See T was the crazy type if requested by her he'll end a babies life'
And if she became a man, he'll remove his dick and act ladylike'
When she comes in the kitchen, you should see him try 'n eat cereal'
I aint hatin' I was just happy he found someone thats wifey material'
As far as family life it wasnt good T had mad beef with his cousin'
Over a car, housing property, past situations,10 g's and a gun clip'
Speaking my mind I said "yall nigas should do away with the beef" '
He said" your right" put on some clothes then gave me the keys'
Pulling up to the apartment to end the beef they had with eachother'
He looked at out the window as I watched his mood get mad than a mother'
I called his name, he ignored lookin thru the glass with a stare'
Telling me that he saw a familar round ass in the air'
I said "dude you allright, cause squashing it, is up to you to decide"
He said "My girls either fucking him or I'm just loosing my mind'
He got real crazy and shit wondering if she aint away on the trip'
I wouldnt blame him for it thinking if another nigas banging his chick'
he was trippin kid describing days he wondered were her lips had been'
And why she smelled like a different colone knowing scent isnt his'
He phoned her cell hoping that she would awnser the call'
Instead of being upstair with his cousin dick crammed in her walls'
Minutes later i spotted two people walking slow to a car'
Showed him the marks then he yelled "thats you ho in the dark"
he got out the car heading towards them I had a grasp on his chain'
Trying to stop the conflict, but he got loose giving her a slap to the face'
I said " I know that she ya heart but theirs other fish in the sea"
He replied "ALl i caught was sharks and god said this ones for me'
I noticed a dark cloud of his as i said dont be on that wylin shit'
Cuz he could now conversate with chicks so be proud of it'
T screamed at her asking if thats his kid in her stomach'
Pulling out a gun, I said " you dont wanna get a bid for this dumbness"
He cried "if it aint mine ima committ suicide with one to the head'
Don't worry you gonna survive but these punks gon' be dead"
Cops arrived and commanded him to drop his weapon'
He refused saying " Im already dead" then cocked his wessem'
He aimed it at her first commanding she say her last wishes'
Before he unleash shells that'll have her body backflippin'
In five shots his girl Toya, cousin and my man had hit the ground'
Giving me fthought of how life would be if my fam wont be around'
Thoughts in my mind said I could've avoided or been out of this'
If I hadnt tryed to be a santa helper my right hands shadowless'

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NICE DROPcould use a little work..........
flow waz aigh but your structure put ya sentences
in tha wrong spot i read it 3 times man just ta see
story line is wat kept me readin it..........some apreciate
feed back well i gave ya some son.......keep elevatin.........CB83holla

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