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i needa link to OM' you left feed back on [/b]
[I]This was a decent peice...
your structure was good..
You had lots of emotions ..
and lots of feeling in this open mic..and i like that
really made me wanna read more..
you have to elevate in wordplay, and using bigger voc..
but other then that this was a decent piece...7/10
Keep it up hope to see another drop from you soon
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