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04-02-05, 04:33 AM
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..Just Another Night - True Story (Keystyle)..
IP: 3CB3 7A5E
Sitten In the Club ~ Smoke Was Fillin My Lungs
Dudes Smokin On the Endo ~ I Had To Get Some One Puff, Two Puff ~ My Vision Had Started To Glare Feelin Sick to My Stomach ~ I Had To Go Out For Air So Me And My Boy ~ Walked Out The Front Door The Smell Of Fresh Frost On Concrete ~ Was Just Leading To War Not Knowin Dudes We Hit ~ Was Coming Back For More This Is The Process Of Karma ~ It Just Was Leading To War So As An All Black Lincoln Pulled Up To The Front Tinted Windows Rolled Down ~ We Saw A Nine And Pump So We Ran And Ducked, Untucked the Heat ~ We Fire'd Right Back Shots Ran Through The Air ~ Just Missen the Fitted Caps And Thats A Missen Fact ~ A Blessin' That We Didnt Get Hit Tonight Cause A Missen Life ~ Is What Draws A Nigga To Strife So As They Pulled Away ~ Me And My Dude Came Out Knowning Nothings Safe ~ We Just Kept The Heat Out Got In The 99 Grand Am ~ Same Color As Papa Smurf Skin 18 Inches Rollin ~ Tryin To Find These Dudes And Merk Them And Thankfully ~ The Night Time Journy Turned Draggin For Us Rollin Into Texaco ~ Its Dudes In A Volkswagon Bus We had To Bust ~ So Shots Fired, They Fired Back As Slugs Penetrated The Side Doors ~ My Dude Was Hit Lower Back Screamin Bloody Murder ~ His Voice Roared Over The Bass We Peeled Out ~ Dude Hurtin I Can See it In His Face Pulled Up To My Place ~ Had To Get To Get Something To Fix Him Up But We Some Real Niggas ~ And My dude Is Nasty Tuff So We Wrapped Him Up ~ Went To Bed Not Finishing The Fight Cause This What Always Happens ~ Its Just Another Night..
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04-02-05, 04:43 AM
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IP: 3CB3 7A5E
Fed On Caspers Shit, And Loosing The Battle
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04-02-05, 01:34 PM
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IP: 3CB3 7A5E
Come ON Yall Its Kap..
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04-02-05, 01:48 PM
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i needa link to OM' you left feed back on [/b]
[I]This was a decent peice... your structure was good.. You had lots of emotions .. and lots of feeling in this open mic..and i like that really made me wanna read more.. you have to elevate in wordplay, and using bigger voc.. but other then that this was a decent piece...7/10 Keep it up hope to see another drop from you soon
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04-03-05, 06:25 PM
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IP: 3CB3 7A5E
Thanks For The Feed...
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04-04-05, 09:22 PM
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Rise to the top..
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