i like this beat for the vibe u were goin for on this track...... yea u should rerecord ur verse cuz its a lil off at some points.... i think if ur still not done, that at some parts where u tryna say too many words on a single line that u should take some out obviously.... but im sayin that also cuz it also would go better to go slower on this track, the beats not bangin so its more lyrical seemin, and its better to make it easier to hear all ur lyrics on those tracks.... especially wen its more of a story....

get this track updated soon, and also, i think itd be cool to just use the beat as a hook, or if not, make it very chill...... like a girls voice or sumthin softer...

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