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Sorry really wasnt feeling this OM'...
you can work at it , and you'll get better dont worry..
You need to learn how to use punchlines...
your structure was pretty much good , but try to use better wordplay
overall this was an okay drop nothing big but keep it up
hope to see another drop from you ...6/10
Ps:i needa link to an OM' you have left feed back too or this will be closed
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