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Old 04-04-05, 08:13 PM   #5
TeamOne
FuxJustAWord
 
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From: Chitown
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i unno if its just wen i listened to it or not..... but the endin happens, and than cuts back in again.... Ur flow was good, emotion was there, not the biggest fan of ur voice, but u cant do much about that.... ahhh quality was decent.... word to wat 9th degree sed, lol... wheres the room for decree on this shit?!?! or are u takin out a verse.... if u are, i suggest the middle one.... thats about it... beat and hook are good, but no shit on that one..... pc
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