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This was decent, could be better
Your structure was pretty messed up , need to learn how to match up your bars..
Learn to use feeling when you write, and show emotions..
Overall this was a decent drop, you can do better
just stay at it and you'll be str8
Ps rop a link to an OM' you have left feedback on or this will be closed
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