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Old 04-05-05, 03:52 AM   #9
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take ur time .. and correct the spelling .. take pride in ya work ya kno ..

good emotion .. im not a fan of rhyming poems but its nothing to fault .. it was a good piece overall but like someone said u need to up ur vocab .. stay up 1
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