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Old 04-05-05, 10:42 AM   #9
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Voted For: MaD_KnighT

over all an alright battle

Mad_Knight i was surprised by your verse overall i thought you had a better verse your structure was a lil wack but to be honest it wasnt that bad. you had some personals and you played off of his name . you had some personals in there as well. next time just bring out some more metaphors and up your vocab

casper- an alright verse but nothing that really hit hard lol the only thing that i really liked was the milk and cookies line otherwise lol i think he had you everywhere else. overall you should work on your vocab and and work on your wordplay no hate man but you shoulda played off his name or his sig also like thug E

both of you need work on your structure

Mad_Knight takes this because he had better punches and was more creative in his verse.. casp don't go so basic with your verse man ..
no hate you both are fam

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